
This is Joseph Kony.
Kony 2012 is a video made by Jason Russell and it is a video to make Kony famous. People do not know Kony; because Uganda's communication is not really advanced like any other countries. I think Kony 2012 is right and I tell you two arguments about it.
First, this can be chance to educate people. Until now, I didn't even know who Kony was and what he did. However, by this writing calss, now I know that I have to beware of these people. Chidren may not know him; and that's the problem. If we make Kony famous, then he would be well known. Children can avoid him and when they grow up, they can say that to beware of this kind of people. Kony can be a good example for criminals.
This leads to the second reason, this can make people in to action. There is an "Action Kit" and there are what people can do for Kony 2012. People can donate money one by one everytime. This can be a big help to people who are fighting with the "L.R.A.". I would love to do that even now.
Other people can say that Uganda has less communication. Then how can Uganda people possably know when someone is coming? The goverment has given the communication support to the people.

What do you think about Kony 2012? Do you agree with me? Or do you disagree? Thanks for reading and sharing your ideas are a great pleasure. Please look at this video.
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The essay is good and I like the tone. It is also good that you have included video and pictures to support your points.
ReplyDeleteRemember to include an opposing argument in the essay as well as a rebuttal.
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